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Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Grammar: “Diet” is a countable noun and usually takes an article.
	[Explanation2]: Language: The term “food” in itself conveys the appropriate meaning and need not be supported by the term “material.”
	[Explanation3]: Grammar: “Part” is a countable noun and hence requires a determiner.
	[Explanation4]: Grammar: Here, the verb form has been corrected.
	[Explanation5]: Language: The word choice has been improved for conciseness.
	[Explanation6]: Grammar: Because the subject “outbreaks” is plural, the verb should also be plural for correct subject-verb agreement.
	[Explanation7]: Typographical error: The spelling error has been corrected.
	[Explanation8]: Language: The clause has been revised for conciseness.
	[Explanation9]: Grammar: “Such as” is the grammatically correct expression.
	[Explanation10]: Subject area: Gene names are spelled out completely at their first mention in the manuscript.
	[Explanation11]: Style: In American English, a comma is placed before "and/or" in lists.
	[Explanation12]: Grammar: Preposition has been corrected.
	[Explanation13]: Language: “Several” is preferred over “many” according to the standard academic convention.
	[Explanation14]: Language: Wordiness is replaced with a more direct and accurate term.
	[Explanation15]: Grammar: Usually “which” is preceded by a comma in nonrestrictive clauses.
	[Explanation16]: Punctuation: Compound adjectives are usually hyphenated.
	[Explanation17]: Journal formatting: As per the journal guidelines, latin words should be italicized.
	[Explanation18]: Language: This term is usually hyphenated.
	[Explanation19]: Punctuation: Coordinate adjectives are separated by commas.
	[Explanation20]: Language: The sentence structure has been improved for enhanced flow of information.
	[Explanation21]: Typographical error: The spelling error has been corrected.

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Remarks

Remark 1:
Please check the edited sentence for any modification of intended meaning.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Language: Revision made for conciseness and readability.
	[Explanation2]: Language: The sentence was reconstructed for clarity and conciseness.
	[Explanation3]: Language: This sentence has been heavily revised for a concise, clear, fluent output. To ensure no meaning change, a remark has been added for the author.
	[Explanation4]: Language: Here “minimum” is a more technically correct term than “minimal.”
	[Explanation5]: Language: Here a wordy phrase has been replaced by a concise term for conciseness.
	[Explanation6]: Subject-area: Gene names are spelled out completely at their first mention.
	[Explanation7]: Subject area: This phrase has been placed here to allow for a better flow of information.
	[Explanation8]: Subject area: This term is required here for clarity.
	[Explanation9]: Subject area: Here, “stages” is a better word than “steps.”
	[Explanation10]: Subject area: Discipline-specific language revision has been made here.
	[Explanation11]: Style: In American English, a comma is placed before "and/or" in lists.
	[Explanation12]: Attention to detail: Compound adjectives are usually hyphenated.
	[Explanation13]: Language: The sentence has been edited for conciseness.
	[Explanation14]: Journal format: As per the journal guidelines, latin words should be italicized.
	[Explanation15]: Language: Sentence edited for enhanced readability.
	[Explanation16]: Subject area: The syntax has been greatly improved for grammatical correctness and clarity.

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